👻 The Vanishing Hour: Part 1 – The Curse of the Empty Room

The silence in the living room was a hollow, echoing thing, broken only by the ragged breathing of two distraught women.

“Our children turned Invisible. They all turned invisible,” Ella’s mother, Mrs. Davies, repeated, her voice a raw, desperate whisper. She paced the worn carpet, her hands twisting nervously. “How did this happen? Why did our children turn invisible? What is happening? And why children? Why children? There’s something happening. I can’t explain it. But we have to find a solution.”

Juliet’s mother, Mrs. Efe, leaned against the doorframe, her face pale with dread. The news of the children’s spontaneous disappearance—not a physical snatching, but an impossible, eerie vanishing into thin air—had paralyzed the entire neighborhood. First, there was Gift, who had gone missing for fourteen terrifying hours only to reappear just as suddenly. Then, in quick succession, Michael, Ella, and now Juliet—all gone, replaced by empty spaces and the chilling certainty that they were still there, just beyond the reach of sight.

“What if this thing wants to take the whole children in the neighborhood?” Mrs. Efe asked, her voice cracking with suppressed hysteria. “What if they whole children are going to disappear one after the other?”

The fear was infectious, spreading faster than any epidemic. It was a fear of the unknown, of the unexplainable, a fear that had turned mothers into frantic researchers scouring forgotten folklore and old wives’ tales for answers. The children were victims of a bizarre, localized curse, and no one, least of all the frantic parents, knew the rules of the game.

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The Assembly Hall: Whispers of Blame

That day, the students of the neighborhood walked to school like shadows of their former selves. They had already heard the news: Ella and Michael—the popular girl and the sporty boy—had also gone missing. The sheer improbability of the vanishings had stoked terror and morbid fascination in equal measure.

The students were called to the assembly hall. The Principal, Madam Ada, stood on the stage, her composure strained. She tried to project authority and calm, but her eyes held a flicker of the same raw panic as the parents outside.

“You all must have heard about the disappearance of some of your school mates,” the Principal said, her voice amplified by the microphone. “You all shouldn’t worry and make sure you stay safe. Be careful, if you hear any information about your missing school mates, don’t hesitate to come tell me. Am I clear?”

“Yes Madam Principal!” the students echoed, the sound thin and uncertain in the cavernous hall.

As they filed out toward their classrooms, the whispers began. Fear needed a target, and the remaining students were quick to find one.

“I think Gift is responsible for this,” Anthonia, a girl known for her sharp observations, said to her friends.

“What do you mean Gift is responsible for this?” her friends asked, leaning in eagerly, craving the certainty of a culprit.

“First Gift went missing and fourteen hours later she returned back,” Anthonia explained, ticking off the points on her fingers. “And then everyone close to her is now going missing. Michael, Ella and Juliet.”

A friend pointed out a flaw: “But Juliet is not close to Gift.”

Anthonia quickly countered, her reasoning fueled by the gossip of the schoolyard. “They are always in same space. Juliet likes Michael and Michael likes Gift. They are always Together. I mean what if this friends just planned this thing to run out of this neighborhood? Or what if Gift is a w!tch and she actually made them disappear?”

Ruth, a girl who spent her weekends reading fantasy novels, added, “Gift is a witch? Are witches Real? We have read it in books. It’s in ancient story book.”

Anthonia dismissed the supernatural notion but clung to the core idea: blame. “What ever that is happening. I am just certain that we are safe.”

“Are you sure about that?” Ruth asked.

“Yes!! Because it just their friend group that’s going missing. I’m so happy I didn’t make friends with that Gift girl.” The collective relief of the onlookers solidified, settling the blame firmly on the mysterious, now-returned Gift and her inner circle.

The day dragged on, the air thick with tension and suspicion. School dismissed that day, and the students went back home, safe in their newfound certainty that the problem lay with them.


Part 2: The Invisible Prison

Outside the school gates, in the oppressive silence of invisibility, three teenagers stood frozen in time and space.

Ella, Michael, and Juliet were still there, bound by the terrible curse that had erased their physical presence from the world. They had spent the entire day wandering the perimeter of the school, silent witnesses to the fear and the cruel speculation of their peers.

“We have been looking for Gift around the school why haven’t we thought of entering this school gate since morning?” Ella finally asked, her invisible voice sounding thin and frustrated in the empty air of their hidden reality.

Michael shrugged, a gesture unseen by anyone but his two invisible companions. “I don’t know.”

Ella’s eyes, burning with a new, terrifying realization, fixed on the closed school gate. “Gift once told me that her mother’s friend gave her biscuit inside the school and that same day she disappeared.”

Juliet, her mind catching up to the horrific implication, gasped. “Are you saying that we are in this situation because Gift collected Biscuit from her mother’s friend inside the school?”

“Yes. What if it is,” Ella insisted, her voice gaining strength. “I mean we have been around the school since morning and never thought of entering it. What if this problem is this school? It started from this school. Inside this school.”

“So what are you saying?” Michael asked.

“We have to go inside this school. Maybe we will find answers,” Ella declared. “Answers that we are looking for. There has to be a secret inside this school that can set us free.”

“Then let’s go in then. What are we waiting for?” Michael was ready.

The three friends steeled themselves. They walked toward the tall, iron gates, the very gates they had passed through thousands of times before. They pushed forward, expecting to step back onto the familiar concrete of the schoolyard.

But they didn’t.

They pushed, but the gate didn’t budge. They felt the cold steel against their invisible hands, yet they couldn’t step through it. They were blocked by an invisible, inexplicable wall.

“Why can’t we get in?” Juliet cried, her fear returning.

“I don’t know. But we have to find a way around and get into this school,” Ella said.

The answers were inside. The key to their freedom, the truth about Gift, the biscuit, the invisibility—it was all sealed behind that ordinary, unforgiving school gate. They were trapped between worlds, victims of a school’s secret, and now, they were prisoners of its boundaries.


To Be Continued.